William N. Robson assumes leadership for Suspense with this curious episode about a young girl who lost her mother to a heart attack. Her father remarries, and she is having some adjustment problems as she still grieves for her mother while her father has moved on. Her birthday is forgotten by her father, but her stepmother remembers, and gives her a new doll. It has a wind-up mechanism that replicates a heartbeat (not very well, but that’s the idea). That may not have been the best choice, as the young girl starts thinking that the doll has to always stay wound, fearing she will suffer the same fate as her mother if the doll’s heart fully unwinds. The headline performer was Patty McCormack, star of the hit movie Bad Seed.
Robson’s new assignment was made by William Froug. He had risen to the executive in charge of CBS Radio’s west coast programming. Robson and Froug worked together in the past and also shared a common history in radio writing and production. Suspense was the surviving drama anthology program while others withered away, and Froug likely decided to give the show a “face-lift” of sorts. The Ellis programs used many shows penned by him, both new and reused from his other series, and relied on the ensemble cast (beloved by modern classic radio enthusiasts). While it is an underappreciated period of the series, many of the Ellis productions seemed to fit Escape more than it did Suspense. Ellis produced and wrote Escape in the latter part of that series. Together, Robson and Froug brought more Hollywood movie and television talent for lead roles, though not Tinseltown’s big headliners. Classic radio enthusiast, researcher, and international performer Keith Scott notes in his Suspense log:
With the show now touted as being fully produced on tape, Bill Robson is still able to entice various well-known personalities willing to appear for union scale. Several movie names retained an affection for the diminishing radio medium, and the shows sound different from the preceding two years under Tony Ellis, which relied totally on anonymous radio artists.
Although not as prestigious as the golden era of Bill Spier, this substantial run of shows under Robson brings back a touch of the old big-name star system to Suspense.
One of the reasons for choosing The Doll as the opening broadcast of the Robson era was the availability of the young star of a hit movie of that time, Bad Seed. The underlying story questions the role of heredity in passing evil intentions and acts to offspring. Patty McCormack was the pretty and innocent-looking young girl who manipulates those around her and may have been responsible for multiple murders. Was she destined for those acts by her genetics?
McCormack also performed the role on Broadway. Having her to appear on radio at the same time Robson was taking over the series was a major publicity opportunity. The movie was in theaters, had generally positive reviews. Some of the publicity was about its shocking ending and whether or not children should be allowed to see it. (There was always concern about children listening to Suspense, so this was nothing new for the series).
McCormack doesn’t disappoint, but she does not have a polished radio performance. One should not be expected. Describing it as a confident performance might be a better description. The days of a cast of young people being skilled radio actors, such as on the legendary series Let’s Pretend, were already past.
Her stage and movie experience with the topic and storyline of Bad Seed may have prepared her for this appearance in this script that is definitely depressing. It might be disturbing to young listeners, but that part is at its very end. It is not the traditional Suspense formula of people in trouble not of their making. It is a hard drama without a happy ending.
In a Walter Ames column in the 1956-10-23 Los Angeles Times, McCormack said “Peggy Chantler wrote the story just for me.” We’re not exactly certain what that means. Chantler was at the relative beginning of her career. She would become a very successful television writer, especially comedies, in the 1960s. What does it mean when it is said that “Peggy Chantler wrote the story just for me”? It’s very unclear. Some of it is tied up in Robson’s history of puffery in promoting what he is producing.
Did Chantler write the story independently and share it McCormack and her agent and family? Did the McCormack family hire Chantler or did Robson? There are times when Robson hypes events or attributes for attention. For example, he claims at the beginning of the 1957-11-24 broadcast of The Star of Thessaly that the script was “written for” the star, bandleader Ray Noble. That script was originally used in an episode of Modern Adventures of Casanova, which Robson produced a few years before. He actually meant “appropriate for” as one might hear when buying clothes and something fits so well that someone says “it’s like it was made for you.” Robson was a writer, knew the truth and the nuance and how it would be taken. Be careful of this Robson guy; he knows how to use words to get what he wants. It is hard to tell what happened here with a quote in the Ames column that was likely coached by CBS publicity or someone else. We may never know.
The music for the broadcast is haunting, and is so unfamiliar to Suspense listeners that it is disorienting when you have the expectation of the usual Suspense style. It was composed by Lyn Murray, likely for this very broadcast. The title is “Pavane for an Unremembered Birthday Present.” The title fits the opening scene and its peacefulness is juxtaposed to the anxiety of the plot element of keeping the doll’s heart mechanism wound tight. That’s probably what makes it fit the description of “haunting.” It is the first of only two times that Murray was in charge of the music on the series.
The surviving recording of the episode has the complete drama, but is missing some other segments. From reviewing scripts that are in the KNX Collection at University of California at Santa Barbara, these segments are available.
At 13:00 the mid-show announcement is missing. The announcement was a PSA. This is from the script:
MUSIC: UP THEME
ANNOUNCER: You don't have to be an efficiency expert to figure out that it’s easier to lend your support to several worthwhile fundraising campaigns all at once than it would be helping one campaign at a time. That kind of efficiency is yours to enjoy through the United Community Campaigns. CBS Radio hopes that when the United Community campaigns are under way in your town that you'll remember how much good you can accomplish with one gesture of support.
MUSIC: SNEAKS… HOLD UNDER
NARRATOR: And now we bring back to our Hollywood sound stage Miss Patty MacCormack starring in tonight's production, “The Doll,” a tale well-calculated to keep you in
MUSIC: CHORD
NARRATOR: SUSPENSE
MUSIC: CHORD FADES
At about 24:30 in the recording there is a brief break in the music. This seems to be an edit similar to the missing mid-show break. It is here that the script has a promotion for Yours Truly, Johnny Dollar. That announcement was:
MUSIC: OUT
ANNOUNCER: A diller, a dollar, hears a real chiller diller for the mystery scholar. Follow Yours Truly, Johnny Dollar every weekday evening on CBS Radio. There’s action packed drama as Johnny Dollar, a suave insurance investigator covers the globe with his expense account to track down frauds and schemers. Every Monday through Friday, Yours Truly, Johnny Dollar meets mystery, romance, thrills, and mayhem. So be sure you meet up with Johnny Dollar for high-keyed excitement right here on CBS Radio.
MUSIC: UP TO FILL
The script in the KNX Collection does not appear to be the actual performance script, but it is close to it. It is possible that it is the version that they used to start rehearsal. They made revisions on their rehearsal session copies and then proceeded with the recording using marked-up pages. Robson’s opening monologue had some revisions that are obvious when the script is compared to the recording. In the same folder there are pages and fragments of pages that show earlier markups.
This is a section of an earlier draft that was marked up and integrated into the copy used at rehearsal. The scene starts at about 17:40 in the recording. It was common to have multiple revisions of scripts leading up to the final version.
For some reason, these marked-up pages were preserved for this episode. Most every other Suspense script in the KNX Collection only has final production scripts with comparatively few revisions or production notations. Scripts in the Spier-Havoc papers at the University of Wisconsin, however, have many files without final scripts. Instead, they contain Spier’s marked-up drafts that led to the final documents. These revisions for The Doll were likely made by Robson in the weeks before the recording session. They preserve continuity and also make the dialogue more natural. It seems they gave this production a lot more editorial attention.
The program was recorded on Thursday, October 4, 1956. The rehearsal session began at 3:30pm. The recording commenced at 9:00pm and concluded at 9:30pm.
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THE CAST
PATTY McCORMACK (Valerie), Richard Beals (Chris), Mary Jane Croft (Paula), Shep Menken (George / 1st Policeman), Dick LeGrand (Old fisherman / Doctor), Luis Van Rooten (Popcorn Man / 2nd Policeman), George Walsh (Narrator)
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A major change in the series format starting with this episode was that it now had an opening monologue. Robson did not have a voice for radio, and that made his introductions so distinct and recognizable. It is reported that Froug was the person who encouraged it. Though it was not stated, there was good reason for the change. In the 1930s and 1940s, radio was always on, and in the afternoons and evenings, people gathered around the radio. Listening was not always attentive, as multitasking was common with kitchen work or reading newspapers, or chores. But families and groups were often around to hear it. At the time of Robson’s Suspense assignment, listening was very often a personal and individual experience. Robson could talk to a solitary and attentive listener, deepening their relationship to the series, and luring them in a personal way, into each story.
In his opening monologue, Robson makes a big deal about Suspense moving to tape production. He makes it seem like it just happened. But seven years earlier, Suspense had already started using tape, especially when guest star schedules made it difficult to book them for live broadcasts. This was also a time when there was going to be more recorded sound effects, and soon there would be pre-recorded music. Yes, Suspense would use more production techniques that involved tape. But it wasn’t a sudden change, but that doesn’t stop Robson from claiming it is. Tape made it easier to get headline guests, but also the regular staff. Keith Scott notes that “George Walsh remains the ‘Signature Narrator,’ and is now able to pre-record his opening descriptions in batches of three or more shows, to be edited in later.” Tape had the two benefits of scheduling flexibility and better management of costs. It helped hide some of the budget restraint and tightening that radio drama was facing.
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